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Punctuated Version:

In Pakistani folklore, Heer Ranjha, Sohni Mahiwal, and Sassi Punnu are iconic tales of star-crossed lovers.

These stories, deeply rooted in tribal connections, serve as allegories and commentaries on spiritual and romantic love.

They explore the complexities of human emotion, the trials of love, and the transformative power of spiritual elevation.

The themes of trial, emotional anguish, separation, and expulsion, resulting in the moral polishing of the lovers, are timeless and universal. Ranjha's epic tale, penned by Waris Shah, is a masterpiece of Punjabi literature—a testament to the power of love to transcend mortal bounds.

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  Sentence Correction

The honor killings that have been perpetuated by societies are exacting a deadly toll on vulnerable individuals, exacerbating the excruciating norms further.

Explanation

In this sentence, there are four errors:

one is related to the use of incorrect verb form;

the second is related to the use of articles;

the third is related to the use of relative pronouns;

the last is related to wordiness.

Error 1: Incorrect Verb Form (“having been perpetuate”)

Error 2: Unnecessary “the” Before “Societies”

The word “societies” is a general plural noun, so “the” is not needed unless referring to specific societies.

Error 3: Incorrect Use of “Which” Instead of “Who”

The relative pronoun “which” is used for things (objects, ideas, animals).

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Sentence Correction

• The experimental novel—which blends elements of poetry and prose—is a challenge to traditional notions of storytelling and narrative structure, but it will be widely accepted by the time it is recognized as a masterpiece.

Explanation
In this sentence, the error is the incorrect use of “Will Have Been” (Future Perfect Tense).
We use “will have been” (future perfect) only when emphasizing that action will be completed before another future event.

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Sentence Correction

• The impact of cyber technology on modern society is being studied by researchers, who have found that it has both positive and negative effects.

Explanation

In this sentence, there is just an error related to the “Subject-Verb Agreement in the Relative Clause” or Adjective Clause.

The verb in an adjective clause must agree with the number of the noun it modifies.

In this sentence, the phrase “who has found” is incorrect because the subject of “who” is “researchers”, which is plural.

So, the helping verb “Has” should be changed to “Have” to agree with the plural noun “researchers.”

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Sentence Correction

• Cultural globalization—a phenomenon that has been driven by technological advancements and economic integration—is a threat to local cultures.

Explanation
In this sentence, there are two errors: one is related to the use of articles before abstract nouns, and the second is related to the use of appositive phrases.

Error 1: Incorrect Use of “The” Before “Cultural Globalization”

The cultural globalization is a threat… (Incorrect)

Cultural globalization is a threat… (Correct)

Error 2: Unnecessary “It Is” in the Appositive Phrase

Cultural globalization—it is a phenomenon that has been driven by… (Incorrect)

Cultural globalization—a phenomenon that has been driven by… (Correct)

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Sentence Correction

• If I am in Lahore, I will contact you.

Explanation

There are two errors in this sentence: one is related to the use of conditional sentences, and the second is related to prepositions.

Error 1: Incorrect Use of “Will” in the If-Clause

In conditional sentences, we do not write “will” in the if-clause (the part after “if”) when referring to a future event.

Instead, we use the present simple or indefinite tense in the if-clause and the future tense (will + verb) in the main clause.

Error 2: Incorrect Use of “Contact to You”

I taught you that the verb “contact” is not followed by the preposition “to” in English.

It is a transitive verb, meaning it takes a direct object.

So, replace “Will” from the first clause and “To” from the second clause to fix the errors.

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Sentence Correction

If I'm stressed out about something, I tend to have a problem falling asleep.

Explanation

This sentence contains two errors: one, grammatical “have problem”; second, contextual “problem to fall”. If you want to score full marks, you need to correct them.

Error: Incorrect Use of “Problem”

The phrase “have a problem” is incorrect for two reasons:

1. Singular Noun Issue

   The word “problem” is a countable noun, so if you use it in the singular form, it must have an article (“a” or “the”).

2. “Problem” Is Not Naturally Followed by “To + Verb”

   We don’t typically use “problem” with an infinitive (to + verb). Instead, we use a gerund (-ing form) or a gerund phrase after it.

   I have a problem to sleep. (Incorrect)

   I have a problem sleeping. (Correct)

Explanation

Sentence Correction

• We cleaned the whole kitchen while our parents were out to dinner.
• We cleaned the entire kitchen while our parents were out to dinner.

Explanation of Errors and Corrections

The error in this sentence lies in the incorrect use of “all” before a singular noun (“kitchen”).

The use of “ALL”

The word “ALL” is always used with plural countable nouns (all the aspirants, all the bureaucrats) and uncountable nouns (all the water, all the information).

However, it cannot be used before singular countable nouns. Instead, we use “the whole” or “the entire” before singular countable nouns.

Explanation

Correct of the following:

1. Having been perpetuated for centuries, the systemic inequalities and discriminatory policies of the government, which have been institutionalized, are a form of structural violence that affects marginalized communities.

   
   

Correct Sentence

Having been perpetuated for centuries, the systemic inequalities and discriminatory policies of the government, which have been institutionalized, are a form of structural violence that affects marginalized communities.

Error 1:

Missing Comma After Introductory Phrase

So, place “COMMA” after the word “Centuries” to fix this error.

Error 2:

Misuse of Commas in a Non-Essential Clause

So, place “COMMAS” before the word “WHICH” and after the word “INSTITUTIONALIZED” to fix this error.

Error 3:

Subject-Verb Agreement in the Adjective Clause

So, change the verb “Has” into “Have” to fix this error.

Explanation

Re-write the following sentences (ONLY FIVE) after filling in the blanks with appropriate prepositions. (05)

1. The massive landslide tumbled ___ the valley below, blocking the river and causing widespread flooding that destroyed crops and habitats.

2. The controversy surrounding arranged marriages raged ___ the Pakistani community, with some arguing that it was a vital part of their cultural heritage, while others saw it as a form of oppression.

3. As she read the poem, the subtle symbolism and metaphors whispered ___ the surface of the words, awakening a depth of emotion within her.

4. The concept of Tawhid, or the oneness of God, lies ___ the very fabric of Islamic theology, weaving together the intricate threads of faith, reason, and spirituality.

5. As social media scrolled endlessly ___ her daily life, her attention span shriveled, leaving waves of distraction.

6. Power consolidated ___ the ruling elite, silencing dissent.

7. Her ornate dress smoothed ___ perfection, hiding flaws.

8. Themes of love and loss wove ___ Ghalib’s verses, creating a rich tapestry of emotion.

Corrected Sentences with Prepositions:

1. The massive landslide tumbled into the valley below, blocking the river and causing widespread flooding that destroyed crops and habitats.

2. The controversy surrounding arranged marriages raged within the Pakistani community, with some arguing that it was a vital part of their cultural heritage, while others saw it as a form of oppression.

3. As she read the poem, the subtle symbolism and metaphors whispered across the surface of the words, awakening a depth of emotion within her.

4. The concept of Tawhid, or the oneness of God, lies at the very fabric of Islamic theology, weaving together the intricate threads of faith, reason, and spirituality.

5. As social media scrolled endlessly through her daily life, her attention span shriveled, leaving waves of distraction.

6. Power consolidated among the ruling elite, silencing dissent.

7. Her ornate dress smoothed to perfection, hiding flaws.

8. Themes of love and loss wove through Ghalib’s verses, creating a rich tapestry of emotion.